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Re: How to Dance Freely in Your Underwear (1)
Clograbby, I'm not very familiar in the ways of the teenage girl, even though I have a thirteen year old sis, but I liked it very much. One question though, ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 7
BigBadBear, I saw this title and was immediately intrigued! This is very creative writing. I read the first six before the seventh (even though I did see the seventh before ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Of Princesses, Romance and Lifesaver Candies
Hello Gryphon Fledgling (BTW, very sweet avatar), Wonderful story, I must say, but I did see a few mistakes along the way, nothing huge, I mean anyone could have made ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: take me
Hey 17, Ok, I'm new too, so I really feel uncomfortable telling people what's wrong with their stuff, but here goes. First off, you need to fit more into your ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Faded Heart
Hey BloodSunset. Ok, here I go, first crit since I've joined this site so I hope I do O.K. I feel you in this poem. It's exactly how I felt ...
Jul 23, 2008